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I haven't been hanging around Newgrounds as much lately because, frankly, I'm getting tired of most of the content. But this was amazing work. I wasn't so sure after viewing part one, but part two definitely made it worth the download.

Excellent animation and artwork and an even more impressive storyline. It's much more effective that the main character doesn't talk. That's a nice touch.

I was surprised by the voice acting. It was actually pretty good, as was the sound quality for the most part.

I watched one of your other pieces and immediately stuck it in my favorites. I think I'll have to do the same for this and I'll definitely be checking out the website.

Good stuff.

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Score: 0

"Not a bad product"

submission: Where's Ollie?

date: December 17, 2003

But, you're right, we've seen it before. I ended up voting zero because I tend to think it's really lame to submit something a second time just to have an account with a better batting average. Once you've submitted, there's really no reason to submit the same thing again. You're just taking up server space.

That said, it's a decent product. Pretty original idea, but a little too hard for me. You could obviously improve the graphics and movement significantly and that music is reeeeeeally annoying. I would have voted a three on this.

At any rate, not bad, but move on and submit new stuff.

Author's Response:

You're absolutely right about the server space thing, which is why I yearn for a "delete movie" button. ;)

Thanks for the criticism, I tried to fix a lotta things in WO2, which I'll post in a day or two. :)

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Score: 6

"I'm torn on this one"

submission: Killing Spree IV - Part 1

date: December 2, 2003

The animation was quite good despite the fact that the characters were sticks. might have given a 10 for graphics if not for that.

i gave a 10 for violence, but in my opinion, thats not always a good thing. i couldn't tell if i was supposed to think this was funny or if i was supposed to take this seriously, or perhaps a little of both. im not real enamored of this blow up the school idea. doesnt really work for me. sounds like its targeted toward a pretty young audience . . . middle school maybe.

male voice acting was decent, the female parts could use a little work.

my biggest pet peeve when it comes to work on newgrounds is that no one seems to proofread what they do. you all spend time making great work and then blow it over some easily fixed grammar. check it before you submit. in this case im referring to the fact that you wrote principle instead of principal.